Nice work on this one! I am a big fan of the chorus especially! If I am nitpicking, I would say to lose the bridge part between the first chorus and the second verse, it doesnt flow well in my opinion. If you have someone with the chops, a quick solo would be nice in that part between the second chorus and the verse (and also change that part from 3 reps to 4 reps through the part). Keep up the good work!