New band - Dead White Day

[pieceofpie6661]

My band finished up our EP, would love some feedback on this third and last single! Also have an instrumental spacey jam up on our Soundcloud.

Let me know your thoughts and enjoy!:

https://soundcloud.com/deadwhitedaymusic/silhouettes

[pieceofpie6661]

Hello everyone, just wanted to let you know I released a new track! Feel really good about the lyrics on this one compared to my older songs. It's heavier (and dare I say "grungier") but I think most of you could dig this:


https://soundcloud.com/deadwhitedaymusic/heed-the-crow


We're also playing a show at The Whisky in LA on Sunday Jan 29th at 9:30pm if anyone is in town/interested! Cheers!

[Aaron]

Nice work on this one!  I am a big fan of the chorus especially!  If I am nitpicking, I would say to lose the bridge part between the first chorus and the second verse, it doesnt flow well in my opinion.  If you have someone with the chops, a quick solo would be nice in that part between the second chorus and the verse (and also change that part from 3 reps to 4 reps through the part).  Keep up the good work! 

[JBattista]

I dig this new song too....quite reminds me of Silverchair. I also agree with Aaron, a quick solo would be perfect to bridge the chorus and verses.

[pieceofpie6661]

Appreciate the feedback guys, glad you dig it! We got lots more music coming out this year...

[pieceofpie6661]

Just recently played our first show at The Whisky a Go Go in LA!! Here's some footage of "Bullet w/ Butterfly Wings" which we covered (along w/ Sex Type Thing) in addition to the 4 originals we played. Check it out and let me know thoughts! I was coming down with a cold so my voice is a bit "thick" on this, but enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WMgegM5k36g